✍️ IELTS — Academic Writing Task 2
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🔶 Part 1 — Tutorial
Step 1 — Analyse the task & define both sides (Advantages vs Disadvantages • Outweigh)
Read the prompt twice and underline the task focus and decision verb: “Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?”; this requires a judgement, not only a list. Identify the topic scope precisely: here it is owning a car, which covers personal convenience, costs and wider impacts (traffic, pollution). Generate two developable advantages: for instance, point A (reliable door-to-door mobility and time saved versus public transport unreliability) and point B (family logistics and access to work/education in poorly served areas). Generate two developable disadvantages: e.g., point C (financial burden — purchase, insurance, maintenance, fuel, parking, depreciation) and point D (social/environmental costs — congestion, emissions, road safety concerns). Decide your weighing criteria early: are you judging mainly at the individual level (time, flexibility, affordability) or also integrating societal effects? Choose a stance that you can justify consistently (e.g., “advantages slightly outweigh disadvantages for many households provided costs are manageable” or the reverse). Note target length (~270–310 words) and time plan (8–9 mins plan, 25–28 write, 3–4 check). Avoid vague generalisations (“cars are always essential”); prefer conditional claims (“in regions with limited transit, car ownership can be decisive”). Keep examples micro-sized, realistic and one-line long. Avoid drifting into a problem–solution or discussion essay; your job is to compare weight and take a clear position. Finally, list a few measurement words you can use to signal weight: “carry more weight,” “offset,” “to a large extent,” “marginal for,” “conditional on income/area.”
Example Box — Decoding the Prompt (Car Ownership • Outweigh)
Prompt: “Owning a car is still a goal for many people. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?”
Focus: Present both sides then judge which side is stronger and explain why.
Typical angles: Advantages → reliability, time saved, access for families/shift workers; Disadvantages → cost burden, congestion, pollution, parking stress.
Pitfall: Listing many ideas without an explicit weighing line or a clear, consistent stance.
Step 2 — Plan a clear structure & argument flow
Use a four- or five-paragraph structure for control and balance. In the introduction, paraphrase the statement briefly and state a thesis that answers the weigh question (“on balance, advantages outweigh setbacks because …” / “drawbacks predominate due to …”). In Body 1, develop the advantages with a labelled topic sentence, then build a reason → mechanism → micro-example chain: e.g., “private cars provide door-to-door reliability, which compresses total travel time and enables childcare pickups; for instance, shift workers can reach late-night shifts when buses are infrequent.” In Body 2, mirror the structure for the disadvantages (financial strain, urban externalities), again with a concise example (insurance plus fuel spikes strain low-income households; parking scarcity wastes time). Insert an evaluation line either at the end of Body 2 or as a short bridge paragraph to compare weight explicitly (“although costs and emissions are real, for households outside dense transit corridors the reliability gains often carry more weight”). The conclusion restates the judgement in fresh language and synthesises the key criterion/condition that drives your verdict (e.g., transit quality, income, urban form). Keep parallelism between bodies so the examiner can see a fair comparison before you decide. Avoid adding new ideas in the conclusion; synthesise instead.
Example Box — Skeleton Plan (Car Ownership • Outweigh)
Intro: Paraphrase + clear thesis answering “outweigh?”.
Body 1 (Advantages): reliability/time + family/access → micro-example.
Body 2 (Disadvantages): cost burden + congestion/emissions → micro-example.
Evaluation: One sentence weighing which side is stronger and why.
Conclusion: Restate judgement + condition(s) (e.g., transit quality / income level).
Step 3 — Write balanced, high-impact paragraphs
Start each body paragraph with a labelled topic sentence so the examiner instantly sees which side you are covering. Turn reasons into mechanisms rather than slogans: “car availability compresses ‘first/last-mile’ gaps, enabling predictable arrival times,” not just “cars are convenient.” Keep micro-examples realistic and one line long (e.g., “a parent combining school drop-off with work travel”). Use evaluative lexis to compare weight: “carry more weight,” “are decisive for,” “tend to be offset by,” “remain marginal when…”. Employ balanced concessions inside paragraphs (“while insurance premiums are significant, car-sharing or fuel-efficient models can mitigate costs”). Maintain register (formal, objective) until your judgement lines, which can be mildly persuasive but still evidence-based. Vary sentence types (one concise sentence followed by a complex one) to keep rhythm. Avoid unprovable statistics; stay with logical chains and plausible illustrations. Tie each paragraph back to the question by showing who benefits or suffers (shift workers vs city-centre residents), which makes the final weighing credible. End Body 2 with a crisp comparison sentence that prepares the conclusion without repeating everything.
Example Box — High-impact Sentences (Car Ownership)
Thesis (advantages outweigh): “On balance, the advantages of car ownership outweigh its drawbacks, chiefly because reliable door-to-door mobility saves time and expands access where public transport is thin.”
Thesis (disadvantages outweigh): “Overall, the disadvantages outweigh the benefits, since rising costs and urban congestion erode most of the convenience cars promise.”
Advantage topic: “Car ownership offers predictable, door-to-door travel that compresses total journey time and supports complex family schedules.”
Disadvantage topic: “However, owning a private vehicle imposes heavy, recurring costs and contributes to congestion and emissions.”
Evaluation line: “For households outside dense transit corridors, reliability often carries more weight than cost, provided the vehicle is economical.”
Conclusion line: “Therefore, while costs and externalities are non-trivial, the mobility gains are decisive in many contexts.”
Step 4 — Language, cohesion, and accuracy
Select precise lexis for mobility and cost: private vehicle ownership, upfront cost, running costs, insurance premiums, maintenance, depreciation, congestion, emissions, curbside parking, last-mile gap, service frequency. Use weighing connectors: while, whereas, despite, nevertheless, on balance, to a large extent, carry more weight than, are offset by. Build reason → mechanism → example chains to show development. Keep referencing tight (“these costs,” “such trade-offs”). Avoid over-signposting with “firstly/secondly” in every sentence; vary with subordinate clauses and participles. Check articles and countability (traffic uncountable; many costs countable). Manage comparatives/superlatives accurately (more reliable than, the most significant drawback). Control hedging to sound academic (e.g., “to a large extent,” “in many urban areas”). Proofread for punctuation in complex sentences (comma after long adverbial clauses). Aim for ~280–310 words and ensure the judgement appears in both the thesis and the conclusion.
Example Box — Quick Quality Checks
Task: Is there a clear verdict on “outweigh”?
Balance: Are both sides explained before judging?
Development: Reason → mechanism → micro-example present?
Evaluation: Is there an explicit weighing line?
Accuracy: Articles, prepositions, comparatives correct?
Universal Fill-in-the-Gap Template — Advantages vs Disadvantages (Outweigh)
Adapt to car ownership by replacing […]. Keep sentences concise and finish with a clear verdict.
Sentence-by-Sentence Scaffold (Car Ownership)
Intro S1 (Paraphrase): Many people still regard owning a car as an important goal.
Intro S2 (Thesis): This essay argues that the advantages [outweigh / do not outweigh] the disadvantages because […].
Body 1 S3 (Advantage — topic): A key benefit is [… e.g., reliable door-to-door mobility …].
Body 1 S4 (Explain): [… mechanism …] which means [… concrete outcome …].
Body 1 S5 (Micro-example): For example, [… one-line plausible illustration …].
Body 1 S6 (Link back): Therefore, for people who prioritise […], car ownership is highly valuable.
Body 2 S7 (Disadvantage — topic): Nevertheless, there are notable drawbacks such as [… e.g., costs/emissions …].
Body 2 S8 (Explain): [… mechanism …] leading to [… impact on households/cities …].
Body 2 S9 (Micro-example): For instance, [… concise illustration …].
Body 2 S10 (Link back): Thus, for [… group/context …], these drawbacks are significant.
Evaluation S11 (Weighing): On balance, although [… disadvantage …], [… advantage …] carries more weight because […].
Conclusion S12 (Restate verdict): In summary, the advantages [outweigh / are outweighed by] the disadvantages.
Conclusion S13 (Condition/Synthesis): This judgement holds especially when [… condition, e.g., transit is limited / vehicles are economical …].
Paraphrase & Thesis — Ready-to-adapt Samples (Car Ownership)
Paraphrase Options
P1: Many individuals still aspire to own a private vehicle.
P2: Despite changing transport options, owning a car remains a common ambition.
Thesis/Opinion Options
Advantages outweigh: While costs and congestion matter, the reliability and flexibility of cars are more decisive for many households.
Disadvantages outweigh: Rising ownership costs and urban externalities now undermine most of the convenience cars promise.
Conditional: The balance depends on context: advantages dominate where public transport is limited, but disadvantages prevail in dense, well-served cities.
🔷 Part 2 — Task
[IELTS Academic] [Writing Task 2] — Advantages vs Disadvantages (Outweigh)
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Question: With the rise of remote work, increasing numbers of employees work from home. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
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With the rise of remote work, increasing numbers of employees work from home. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Write at least 250 words. Present a clear stance, develop both sides, include compact examples, and give a final weighing judgement.
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🔷 Part 4 — Vocabulary (10 Key Words)
Key Vocabulary from the Task
This section teaches ten high-value words frequently used when discussing remote work and “advantages vs disadvantages” essays. Each item includes IPA (BrE/AmE), part(s) of speech, patterns, a clear definition, an example with a short gloss, useful synonyms, and common learner mistakes.
verb noun
Patterns: commute (from A) to B; a long/short commute.
Definition: to travel regularly between home and workplace; the journey itself.
Example: “Remote work removes the daily commute, saving at least an hour.” — (gloss: cutting travel time improves productivity.)
Synonyms: travel to work; daily journey.
Common mistakes: ❌ “Do a commute” → ✅ “have a commute / commute”; ❌ “commute to home” → ✅ “commute to work”.
noun (U)
Patterns: autonomy in doing sth; grant/offer autonomy.
Definition: the freedom to organise your own work and make decisions without constant supervision.
Example: “Remote policies can increase autonomy in scheduling complex tasks.” — (gloss: workers choose when/how to work.)
Synonyms: independence; self-direction.
Common mistakes: ❌ “an autonomy” (uncountable) → ✅ “greater autonomy”.
noun (U)
Patterns: boost/harm productivity; productivity gains/losses.
Definition: the rate at which useful work is produced, especially compared with time or resources used.
Example: “Quiet home offices may lead to measurable productivity gains.” — (gloss: output increases per hour.)
Synonyms: output; efficiency (not identical but related).
Common mistakes: ❌ “do productivity” → ✅ “increase/improve productivity”.
adjective
Patterns: ergonomic chair/desk/setup; ergonomic design.
Definition: designed for efficiency and comfort, reducing physical strain.
Example: “Companies should provide an ergonomic setup to prevent back pain.” — (gloss: safe furniture avoids injury.)
Synonyms: user-friendly; posture-safe (informal).
Common mistakes: ❌ “ergonomics chair” → ✅ “ergonomic chair”.
noun (U)
Patterns: feel/work in isolation; social/professional isolation.
Definition: a state of being separated from others, which can reduce support and morale.
Example: “Full-time home workers may suffer from isolation without regular check-ins.” — (gloss: fewer social contacts.)
Synonyms: solitude (neutral/positive); loneliness (negative nuance).
Common mistakes: ❌ “an isolation” (uncountable) → ✅ “experience isolation”.
noun (U)
Patterns: remote onboarding; streamline/strengthen onboarding.
Definition: the process of integrating a new employee into a company’s systems, culture, and workflows.
Example: “Clear documentation makes onboarding faster for remote hires.” — (gloss: new staff learn quicker.)
Synonyms: induction; orientation.
Common mistakes: ❌ “an onboarding” → ✅ “the onboarding process”.
noun (U)
Patterns: maintain/share documentation; documentation on/about sth.
Definition: written records that explain procedures, decisions, or systems so others can work independently.
Example: “Good documentation reduces meeting time by answering routine questions.” — (gloss: text replaces calls.)
Synonyms: written guidance; reference materials.
Common mistakes: ❌ pluralise unnecessarily (“documentations”) → ✅ uncountable “documentation”.
adjective
Patterns: synchronous communication/meetings; work synchronously.
Definition: happening at the same time for participants (e.g., live meetings or calls).
Example: “Use synchronous calls for complex decisions that need quick feedback.” — (gloss: live talk solves issues fast.)
Synonyms: real-time; live.
Common mistakes: ❌ spelling “syncronous” → ✅ “synchronous”.
adjective
Patterns: asynchronous updates/workflows; communicate asynchronously.
Definition: not happening at the same time; people respond when available (e.g., email, shared docs).
Example: “Document choices so teams can collaborate asynchronously across time zones.” — (gloss: no need to be online together.)
Synonyms: staggered; time-shifted (contextual).
Common mistakes: ❌ “asyncronous” (spelling) → ✅ “asynchronous”.
noun (U)
Patterns: accountability for results; build/ensure accountability.
Definition: responsibility for outcomes, with a duty to explain actions and meet agreed goals.
Example: “Clear goals increase accountability in distributed teams.” — (gloss: people own the result.)
Synonyms: responsibility; answerability.
Common mistakes: ❌ “…for doing a mistake” → ✅ “…for a mistake / for making a mistake”.
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🔶 Part 5 — Phrases & Expressions (10 Items)
Useful Expressions for the “Outweigh” Essay (Remote Work Topic)
Each item includes BrE/AmE IPA, part(s) of speech, patterns, a clear definition, an example with a short gloss, common synonyms, and typical mistakes to avoid. Boxes use a dark-blue outline to match your template.
noun (U)
Patterns: improve/undermine work–life balance; seek a better work–life balance.
Definition: the degree to which someone can manage work duties and personal life without excessive stress.
Example: “Remote schedules can strengthen work–life balance by removing daily travel.” — (gloss: less commuting → more time for life.)
Synonyms: life–work harmony; work–life integration (contextual).
Common mistakes: ❌ “work and life balance” → ✅ “work–life balance”.
verb phrase
Patterns: A carries more weight than B; carry greater weight.
Definition: to be more important or persuasive than something else in a comparison.
Example: “For many roles, time savings carry more weight than the risk of isolation.” — (gloss: benefits are stronger.)
Synonyms: outweigh; matter more than.
Common mistakes: ❌ “carry more weight from” → ✅ “carry more weight than”.
adj adv
Patterns: door-to-door travel/time; work door-to-door (as adverbial).
Definition: covering the whole trip from one’s home to the destination without intermediate stages.
Example: “Home working eliminates door-to-door travel altogether.” — (gloss: the whole journey disappears.)
Synonyms: end-to-end; point-to-point.
Common mistakes: ❌ “door to door” (write with hyphens in formal text) → ✅ “door-to-door”.
plural noun
Patterns: generate/realise time savings; significant time savings.
Definition: minutes or hours saved when a process becomes faster or a step is removed.
Example: “Skipping rush-hour commuting results in substantial time savings each week.” — (gloss: many hours returned.)
Synonyms: saved hours; reduced time cost.
Common mistakes: ❌ singular “a time saving” (awkward) → ✅ “time savings”.
linking phrase
Patterns: sentence adverbial: On balance, …
Definition: considering all the advantages and disadvantages together; overall.
Example: “On balance, remote work benefits most knowledge workers.” — (gloss: overall judgement.)
Synonyms: overall; all things considered.
Common mistakes: ❌ “in balance” → ✅ “on balance”.
adverbial phrase
Patterns: clause adverbial: To a large extent, X depends on Y.
Definition: in many or most cases; mainly.
Example: “Success at home working to a large extent depends on clear goals.” — (gloss: mainly determined by goals.)
Synonyms: largely; predominantly.
Common mistakes: ❌ “in a large extent” → ✅ “to a large extent”.
noun (C)
Patterns: a trade-off between A and B; accept/weigh trade-offs.
Definition: a situation where gaining one thing means losing or reducing another.
Example: “There is a trade-off between flexibility and spontaneous team learning.” — (gloss: gain flexibility, lose informal learning.)
Synonyms: compromise; balancing act.
Common mistakes: ❌ “trade of” (spelling) → ✅ “trade-off”.
verb phrase
Patterns: mitigate costs/risks/impacts; mitigate the cost of X.
Definition: to make something bad less severe.
Example: “Equipment stipends can mitigate the costs of setting up a home office.” — (gloss: reduce the expense.)
Synonyms: reduce; lessen; alleviate.
Common mistakes: ❌ “mitigate against” (wrong) → ✅ “mitigate something”.
noun adj
Patterns: first-mile problem; last-mile connection/gap.
Definition: the initial/final part of a journey or process that is often slow or inefficient.
Example: “Home working removes the last-mile gap between transit stops and offices.” — (gloss: no need to walk/transfer.)
Synonyms: end-segment; final leg.
Common mistakes: ❌ missing hyphen → ✅ “last-mile”.
idiomatic noun phrase
Patterns: prioritise outcomes over optics; a culture of outcomes over optics.
Definition: valuing real results more than appearances (e.g., being seen at a desk).
Example: “Distributed teams should reward outcomes over optics to keep performance fair.” — (gloss: judge results, not visibility.)
Synonyms: results first; substance over show.
Common mistakes: ❌ “outcome over optic” (singular/wording) → ✅ “outcomes over optics”.